Necromancer-Ville (The Fanfic to end Ultra World)

["The Black Knight"]

Prologue

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Klattu ran through the dark forest. he was being chased by about a thousand undead. he then remembered what Zhilo taught him 100 years earlier. To summon undead of the Kadas! " Irash!" he screamed with all his might. Out of the ground came a zombie of Zenrais Starbane himself! the zombie attacked the minions, tearing them to shreads!

Chapter 1 up soon!

["The Black Knight"]

Chapter 1

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I'm getting a little ahead of myself. So here's where it begins. Klattu was sitting inside the tomb of Zhilo Kada. His descendant was murdered in cold blood by his own brothers, Nicto and Veratta. he casted a spell and a dragon appeared. He was the first Draco-Necromancer in 39000 years.The last time it had happened was 19,000 years before he was born. Tommorow would be his 20,100th birthday. The one bad part about it being his birthday would be that his brothers ALWAYS try and kill him on his birthday. So he went to sleep and asked his dragon to guard him while he sleeps.

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Chapter 2

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With the death of Jake and the others being Klattu's own falt he was greiving but for 100 years had been searching for their immortal killer. he pounded his fist hard on the table in front of him spilling the coffee on it. suddenly over the shining moon a familiar sight appeared! it was Fluffy the Dracolich! Sephulchure and his army of the undead must have been closing in. He still had the Destiny Weapons in his posession but who to give them to? They were upgraded in strength by the Paladin Artix. The last attempt to destroy Sephulchure was failed by the ones whose very killer he had been seeking all this time! The world had been that as it was in medieval times plus technology of the future and past.

[jeroukoo]

I am a little confused on reading the paragraphs myself. And maybe extend the chapters?

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If you don;t understand then you need to reread ALL Ultra World rps

[jeroukoo]

Little to much for me to read... or much anyone... And I wasn't talking about the story, I'm talking about the actual sentence flow. Not saying your a bad writer, just it's hard to follow the paragraphs.

[Viiral Kookiez]

This isnt a fan fic these are paragraphs, these chapters are the length of like cat in the hat books... Average fanfic length, 1-2 pages on like microsoft word. Locked. Pm me a better chapter and maybe i'll unlock it..