Demigod Summer academy part 1

["The Black Knight"]

I was in home room when I felt a piece of paper hit my head. I woke up and then I heard "ZENRAIS. LEO. TOBIAS. STAY AFTER CLASS!" Yes Mrs. Stork."I yelled that being mad. Oh and by the way my name is Zenrais Starbane. Afetr everyone left we stayed then suddenly Mrs. Stork turned into a HUGE Dracane. "OH CRAP!!!"

To be continued.

[-JCAngel]

It's cool, but you need to um, tell rather than show as in...add more detail.

["The Black Knight"]

I am not at liberty to or else Vincent and Whittman will murder me.

[pegasasu]

I would add more details, and change it so it isn't exactly like Percy Jackson and the Olympians.

["The Black Knight"]

You do realise that as the story goes on it is NOTHING LIKE IT

[pegasasu]

Hmm, lets see, teacher turns into some sort of creature. Where do I know that from?

["The Black Knight"]

CXan Percy JAckson turn intoa fire demona dn shoot fire from his hands? I THINK NOT!