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Lock It (Don't REALLY lock it, It's just the name of the poem)
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[color=#000000][b][u]Lock It[/u][/b][/color]

Sickened of sleep
don't want any more
but I keep going
till' God locks the door
Can't wake up
can't dream
can't wander
can't even scream
I lay alone
no things to see
my eyes are closed
forever, see
Can't move
can't touch
can't breathe
can't do much
until God locks the door
with the slightest touch
Dead everywhere
don't see a thing
I can't even feel
my hand and the ring
I'm sickened inside
but how can I
I'm dead is all
nothing everywhere
until of course
God locks the door.

Uh... 5 minutes? Kind of drowsy as I wrote, so it sounds a bit stupid.
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#2
I like this one alot for some reason.
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#3
Really now? ^_^
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#4
Yeah I dont know why but I just like it.
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#5
Yes, but the point of the poem is that the person is basically dead, and she's waiting for God to finally kill her soul (thus being locking the door) so she can erase herself from the world since she has no more purpose. I don't know, It's something like that. IT DOESN'T MEAN I'M EMO -slaps all who reads- I was just thinking thoughts.
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#6
Yeah that makes sence
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#7
Good. -stare-
xD
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