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Fall Asleep In your arms
#1
I fall asleep in your arms
Hoping that upon me will fall no harm
You drop me into a pot of ash
You try to wipe away the past
You loved me now all you do is lie
I try to talk to you and you make me cry
I wish that I didn't have to be this way
But I guess this is how it will stay
You ripped me apart
You stole my heart
I'm nearly dead
Now your'e laughing in your bed
My emotions are mixed
My soul is ripped
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#2
It makes sense. It's an okay poem...
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#3
Thanks....I guess..
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#4
lol sorry. I was a bit depressed then, I had shared 2 boxes of Dibs with Sada... yeah.
It's seriously good. :)
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#5
Thanks!!!
*Gives Dreamscape some Ice Cream*
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#6
a little depressing(like I'm one to talk), but it's good.
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#7
Thanks!!
*Gives Grim a new PS3*
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#8
I wish I had a PS3 there's a game I want for it.
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#9
Cool.
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#10
you've earned some respect from me with this poem. I had to write poems for class one time, and they were very depressing.
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